淮南英语辅导,2020届高三百所名校好题之书面表达

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【安徽省“江淮十校”2019-2020年高三上学期第一次联考】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你的近况。请根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件

1. 上周刚参加了高三开学典礼,并代表高三学生发言;

2. 个人的感受以及对高三的规划

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Tom,

I am more than delighted to hear from you. Everything has been going well with me so far.

Last week, I attended the opening ceremony designed for Senior Three students in our school. At the ceremony, I gave a speech on behalf of all the Senior Three students, expressing our thanks to all the teachers for their hard work and help. I also promised that all my schoolmates and I would make every effort to achieve our dreams.

As you know, in China, the students, who have to take college entrance examinations, will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high school, and so will I. But I will take the challenge bravely, making full use of my time to improve my study, and meanwhile, trying to keep in a good state physically.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一封介绍信。学生们需要作为李华,按照题干中的要点介绍最近的高三开学典礼情况以及自己的感受以及对高三的规划。

第1步:审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示:你作为李华,向Tom介绍近况。介绍上周刚参加的高三开学典礼时时态应以一般过去时为主,介绍规划时以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。

第2步:确定关键词(组),提炼写作要点。如:more than delighted (特别高兴),going well with me(我一切都很好),the opening ceremony(开学典礼),gave a speech (发表演讲),on behalf of(代表),expressing our 

thanks to…(对……表达感谢),make every effort to(全力做),making full use of(利用好)等。

第3步:遣词造句:同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,同时要点表述要完整,文章要通顺,准确使用时态和语态。

第4步:连句成文:写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语,使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型,如定语从句等,以提高文章档次。

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式,如:第二段第一句使用了过去分词作定语,第二句使用了现在分词作状语,第三句使用了宾语从句。第三段第一句使用了定语从句和倒装句,第二句使用了两个现在分词短语作状语等。本文还使用了一些高级词汇,如more than delighted; expressing our thanks to ; make every effort to achieve our dreams; take the challenge bravely; making full use of my time; keep in a good state physically等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

 

【2020届8月贵州省贵阳市普通高中高三摸底】某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论,向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题,按照以下要点发表你的观点:

1. 意义;

2. 现状;

3. 建议

注意:1. 词数 100 左右;

2. 文章标题已拟好,不计入总次数。

3. 参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage classification

On Garbage Classification

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】                                                                      On Garbage Classification

Garbage classification nowadays is receiving mixed opinions with some people applauding it while others dismissing it as inconvenient. Nevertheless, however unaccustomed people may feel, they must observe the new regulation.

I hold it firm that the value of garbage classification can’t be over-emphasized, and its advantages are as follows. To begin with, it is environmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land occupation used to bury garbage. Moreover, it is economically-beneficial, for it will not only save the cost of processing garbage, it will also enable the reuse of the recyclable.

Significant as garbage classification is, people’s confusion about the categories of trash sometimes discourages their willingness to do it. Accordingly, a series of campaigns should be in place to help people build up a strong awareness of the necessity and understand how to categorize trash.

In a word,garbage classification is a worthwhile course which will benefit future generations.

【分析】这是一篇议论文写作。

第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为环保类的热点话题,某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论,向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题,按照以下要点发表你的观点:1. 意义;2. 现状;3. 建议。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:garbage classification(垃圾分类),applaud(赞同;称赞),dismiss(反对;不理会);unaccustomed(不习惯);land occupation(土地占用);recyclable(可回收利用的)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如garbage classification nowadays is receiving mixed opinions with some people applauding it while others dismissing it as inconvenient.运用了while表示前后对比;To begin with, it is environmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land occupation used to bury garbage.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

【广西柳州市2020届高三摸底】假设你叫李华,听说即将来你校任职的外籍教师David需要一名学生助手,你想自荐做他的助手。请你用英文写一封自荐信,要点包括:

1.写信目的;

2.你作为助手的优势;

3.表达期待。

注意:1.词数:100左右;

2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear David,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant. I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need. I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封自荐信,自荐做他的助手。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:总分法

   总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:

1.写信目的;

2.你作为助手的优势;

3.表达期待。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

grateful; ask to; look forward to

第三步:连词成句

1.    I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union.

2.    It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

3.    I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant.

4.    I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.

5.    What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need.

6.    I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China.

7.    If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

8.    I’m looking forward to your coming.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:“I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.”这句话运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

【河北省邢台市2020届高三上学期第一次摸底】假定你是李华,你的外国网友Tom明年即将来北京留学,他想知道北京的基本情况。就此请你用英语给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:

1.表示欢迎和期待;

2.介绍北京(地理位置、气候、景点等);

3.询问他到达北京的时间。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you will come to Beijing to study. It's a big surprise for me and I'm looking forward to seeing you earlier.

Located in the north part of China, Beijing is the capital of our country. It is hot and rainy in summer but cold and dry in winter. It is a big city with many tourist attractions, such as the great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. Would you mind telling me when you will arrive in Beijing? I will pick you up at the airport and show you around those beautiful places.

Yours.

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华,你的外国网友Tom明年即将来北京留学,他想知道北京的基本情况。就此请你用英语给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎和期待;2.介绍北京(地理位置、气候、景点等);3.询问他到达北京的时间。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:a big surprise(大惊喜),look forward to(期待),located in(坐落于);tourist attractions(景点),pick sb. up(顺路接某人)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m glad to hear that you will come to Beijing to study.运用了宾语从句;Located in the north part of China, Beijing is the capital of our country.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

【辽宁省六校协作体2020届高三上学期开学考试】假定你是李华,你校定于本周六晚为外国留学生举办包饺子活动。请给美国留学生Mary写一封电子邮件,邀请她参加。内容包括:

1. 写信目的;

2. 活动安排;

3. 期待回复。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Mary,

How is everything with you? I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening.

Intended to arouse the affection of foreign students with Chinese culture, this party will allow you to learn the history of dumplings and their importance to Chinese people. Besides, you can participate in interesting traditional Chinese games, in which your oral Chinese will be practiced through interactions with your fellow students.

I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country. Looking forward to your presence!

Yours

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。

第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1. 写信目的;2. 活动安排;3. 期待回复。第二,人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,写信目的以及活动的时间和地点。第二段,活动安排。第三段,表达希望。

第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:  invite,interactions,dumpling-making party in our school dining hall this Saturday evening,arouse the affection ,Chinese culture,earn the history of dumplings and their importance, participate in, be practiced, grasp this opportunity, enrich your life, deepen your understanding。

第四步:确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening. 省略that的宾语从句I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country。

第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Besides,however。

第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。

文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening. 省略that的宾语从句I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

【山西省大同市2019—2020学年高三上学期开学模底】假定你是李华,你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动,针对“低头族”这一问题, 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机,尽量抬起头来,注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件,邀请他一起参加。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

注意:1.行文连贯流畅;2.参考词汇:低头族:phubber 3.词数100词左右 Dear Henry,

How's everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Henry,

How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.

An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。

第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封邀请信:假定你是李华,你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动,针对“低头族”这一问题, 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机,尽量抬起头来,注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件,邀请他一起参加,时态应为一般现在时。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; phubber(低头族),convenience(保便利),invite(邀请),harmful(有害的),physical health(身体健康)及safety(安全)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有take part in(参加),care about(关心),happen around (在身边发生),be harmful to(对……有害),call on(号召)以及pay attention to(注意),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”,状语从句“If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.”,非谓语动词“I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。

【湖北省武汉市部分学校2020届高三上学期起点质量监测】假定你是李华,暑假接受了大型运动会志愿者培训,你的外国朋友Lisa询问你培训经历。请回信告知,内容包括:

1. 培训时长、地点;

2. 培训内容;

3. 你的体会。

注意:1. 词数10左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Lisa,

Glad to hear from you again. How's everything going?What about your summer holiday?

I was lucky to be chosen as a volunteer for the coming great sports meeting. We were trained this summer. After the school was over at the beginning of July,we gathered together in a university to be trained,and the training lasted for about a month. Every day in the morning we had classes to learn how to greet guests,how to offer service to them and the knowledge of related sport games. In the afternoon,we had physical exercise.

The training was so interesting and useful that all of us devoted to it. I hope I will perform the task well in August.

I will visit England with my parents next year. Hope to see you then.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文。外国朋友Lisa想问询有关于大型运动会志愿者培训的经历,要求李华进行回复。

第一步:

首先审题,外国朋友Lisa想问询有关于大型运动会志愿者培训的经历,要求李华进行回复。

第二步:

确认时态,选用正确的人称和时态,本文可用一般现在时或一般将来时,第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。

第三步:

文章可以分为四段,第一段向对方提出简单的问候;第二段介绍培训时长、地点、内容;第三段分享对这次培训的心得和体会;第四段提出一个展望和期待。

第四步:

注意事项:①写这篇文章时,要注意文中给出的细节都要包括,不要遗漏;

②这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可;

③写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题;

④尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的高级词汇、复合句和高级语法。例如:

被动语态的使用:I was lucky to be chosen…; We were trained…;

to do不定式的变体:…we gathered together in a university to be trained…

after引导的时间状语从句:After the school was over at the beginning of July,we gathered together…

so…that引导的结果状语从句:The training was so interesting and useful that all of us devoted to it.

【河南省焦作市2020届新高三上学期定位考试】假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将举办一次”英语角”活动,请你给外教Peter写一封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:

1.时间和地点;

2.交流主题(高中生使用手机的利弊;手机是否应该被允许带入学校)。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua,head of the English Club in our school. I’m writing to tell you that we’ll have an English Corner activity,which will take place in the library next Saturday afternoon. You are welcome to join us!

The topics for discussion are related to smart phones,which are very popular among Chinese high school students.

We are going to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of high school students using smart phones and whether using smart phones should be allowed in high schools.

Please drop me a line to tell me your decision at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

 

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。

第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1.时间和地点;2.交流主题(高中生使用手机的利弊;手机是否应该被允许带入学校)。第二,人称为第一人称,第二人称和第三人称。第三,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段,时间和地点。第二段,交流主题。第三段,高中生使用手机的利弊;手机是否应该被允许带入学校。第四段,表达希望。

第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:allow, head of the English Club,English Corner activity,take place,in the library next Saturday afternoon,be related to ,smart phones,advantages and disadvantages, drop sb a line。

第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to tell you that we’ll have an English Corner activity,which will take place in the library next Saturday afternoon. 现在分词作后置定语We are going to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of high school students using smart phones。

第五步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。

文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to tell you that we’ll have an English Corner activity,which will take place in the library next Saturday afternoon. 现在分词作后置定语We are going to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of high school students using smart phones。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

【2020届安徽省皖江名校联盟高三第一次联考】假设你是李华,你作为交换生正在英国学习,你所在城市博物馆正在展出来自中国的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中国文化的自愿者作为讲解员,需要写一封信给博物馆申请做一名讲解员。

要点如下:1.写信目的。2.个人能力优势。3.能做的事情。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.开头结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。

Dear Sir or Medam,

My name is Li Hua.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school. I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.

To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that I am from China and used to be a volunteer in Shanghai Museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics. Furthermore, being an outgoing and optimistic boy, I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure. Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.

I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,申请做一名讲解员。。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:总分总法

   总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:

1.写信目的。

2.个人能力优势。

3.能做的事情。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

be delighted to; be supposed to do; have no difficulty communicating with ;formal; casual; look forward to

第三步:连词成句

1.My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school.

2.I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.

3. I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure.

4.Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.

5.I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required 和I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.这句话运用了that引导的宾从句。the fact that I am from China and used to be a volunteer in Shanghai Museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics.运用了同位语从句。使用了一些固定词组,如be delighted to ; be supposed to do; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

【长春市普通高中2020届高三质量检测(一)】假定你是李华,九月末将去纽约交流学习,得知当地博物馆要举办中国传统服装展,正在招募志愿者。请写一封申请信,内容包括:

1.写信目的;2.个人特长;3.期待回复。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’m a middle school student from China and I’m going to study in New York in late September. Knowing that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is to be held in a local museum, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer to help around.

First, I’m interested in clothing design and I’ve read lots of books on the costume features of different dynasties. Besides, being a fluent English speaker, I can help introduce the styles and history to the visitors. Most importantly, it would be an honor to spread our culture and promote cultural exchange between the two countries.

I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请信。应聘纽约当地博物馆的志愿者。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。

结构:总分

要求:1.写信目的;2.个人特长;3.期待回复。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

traditional Chinese clothing;local museum;apply to;volunteer ;clothing design;costume features;an honor;look forward to等。

第三步:连词成句

Knowing that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is to be held in a local museum, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer to help around.

I’m interested in clothing design and I’ve read lots of books on the costume features of different dynasties.

I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

文章结构顺序清晰:First, ….    Besides, ….       Most importantly,….

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

本范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了许多句型句式:非谓语句式Knowing that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is to be held in a local museum, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer to help around.;以及being a fluent English speaker, I can help introduce the styles and history to the visitors ;It+be+名词+to do sth.句式it would be an honor to spread our culture and promote cultural exchange between the two countries.;It作形式宾语的句式I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

 

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