淮南英语一对一高考英语作文----邀请信

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高考英语作文----邀请信

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[经典考题]                                 (悟一悟)

[典例] (2017·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper­cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1.展览时间、地点;

2.展览内容。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

                                                                             

                                                                                                                                                        

                                                                            

                                                                            

[满分范文]

Dear Henry,

①I am Li Hua, a student from your writing class. ②There is going to be a paper­cutting exhibition in the Art Museum on Sunday. ③I am writing to invite you to go there with me.

④You know, paper­cutting is one of the traditional Chinese art forms with a long history. ⑤Since you are fond of traditional Chinese culture, I think this is a great opportunity that cannot be missed. ⑥The exhibition lasts from 9:00 am to 5:30 pm. ⑦Not only will all kinds of paper­cutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. ⑧Anyone interested is welcome to visit for free.

⑨Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

[阅卷评点]

①同位语成分“a student from your writing class”的使用,使语言表达更地道。

③使用邀请信的常用句式“I am writing to invite you to ...”表明写信目的,直奔主题。

④句中使用with短语作定语,使表达更丰富。

⑤使用了高级词汇opportunity,以及since引导的状语从句和that引导的定语从句,增加了文章的得分点。

⑧形容词interested作后置定语使语言更简洁地道,高级结构“be welcome to do sth.”的使用为文章锦上添花。

 

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