淮南英语辅导高考英语作文-------申请信

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高考英语作文-------申请信

 

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[经典考题]                                       (悟一悟)

[典例] (2015·陕西高考)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

 Volunteers Wanted

Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15­17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.

写作要点:

1.表达写信意图;

2.陈述应征目的;

3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。

写作要求:

1.邮件词数不少于100;

2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;

3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;

4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Ms Chen,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. 

                                                                            

                                                                             

                                                                            

                                                                             

                                                                            

                                                                             

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

[满分范文]

Dear Ms Chen,

①I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. ②I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

③As a student, it is my responsibility to contribute to my school. ④Admittedly, volunteering is a good method, which is beneficial to not only the school’s construction, but also the individual’s development. ⑤Since here comes an opportunity and I have enough time for dedication, I’d like to take the position.

⑥Considering my personal conditions, I confidently think I am capable of the position. ⑦First, I have industriousness and endurance, which are necessary qualities for volunteering. ⑧In addition, I am outgoing and easy to cooperate with, so I can coordinate well facing emergencies. ⑨Last but not least, I specialize in English and it will be useful while working.

⑩Looking forward to your reply!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

[阅卷评点]

③此句中,“it is+n.+to do”句型的正确使用体现了作者扎实的英语功底。

④Admittedly的正确使用着实体现了作者深厚的词汇积累,which引导的非限制性定语从句,“not only ...but also ...”的使用为文章锦上添花。

⑤此句运用了倒装句,以here开头用完全倒装结构,属于高级表达。

⑥现在分词“Considering sth.”作状语,接着在think后面接一个宾语从句,使得句子更加复杂化,更加高级,体现了作者驾驭语言的能力。

⑦industriousness, endurance这两个词用得非常地道,这样的高级表达是文章表达细微处的一个亮点。

⑨Last but not least, specialize in的地道运用,以及while working这个省略句的正确使用使得句子更加地道和专业。

 

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