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亮点词汇及句式让你的作文不落俗套淮南英语作文辅导培训

亮点词汇及句式让你的作文不落俗套淮南英语作文辅导培训

高考阅卷时。英语作文往往在1分钟内就会被判定生死,如果一篇作文中的词汇大众化、表达平庸,很容易使已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。

如果能在词汇方面与众不同、让人眼前一亮,阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬;在句式方面:如果考生体现深厚的语言功底,运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式,阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文定位为优秀作文列。
淮南英语作文辅导培训,英语亮点词汇及句式作文

写作主要考的是考生遣词造句的能力,表达准确、地道自然、生动形象是遣词的基本原则。如果一个考生能在掌握基本词汇的基础上,升华常用词汇,你的作文就是亮点。

那么怎样才能使用亮点词汇呢?今天我们就总结一下。

1.恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,“语”众不同,避免人云亦云。给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。

①I’m busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. 

→I’m occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达)

②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.

→Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
淮南英语作文辅导培训,英语亮点词汇及句式作文

2.尽量避免重复使用相同的词语。更新换代,避免重复

①The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.

→The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)

②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be.

→We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.

3.短语优先,单词与短语巧妙互用。“一词传神”。

①I’ve decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.

→I’ve made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)

②We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.

→We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

(2015·福建高考书面表达)

③We can look at this problem in many ways.

→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)
淮南英语作文辅导培训,英语亮点词汇及句式作文

4.用高级词汇代替低级词汇

①I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.

→I owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)

②Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.

→Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017·天津高考书面表达)

写作时,在用词上不可随心所欲,决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语,也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇,否则给人过分炫耀之嫌,得不偿失。

以上是淮南英语作文培训指导老师宫灿灿指导总结。

 

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